Dr. Jamie Bondage

Serena: I smiled as he spent a couple hours teaching me how to surf. Finally, I was exhausted and asked if we could take a break. It was getting dark, ...

This was interesting. I didn't see any gramatical errors. All the sentences seemed correct. This seemed really short. I loved your description. it was great. but there doesnzt seem like ...

Brian: I yawned and opened my eyes. I was more tired than I thought I was. I looked around for Kenya, but she wasn't there. I sighed and stretched. I ...

Serena: I felt someone gently shacking me awake. I opened my eyes. I yawned. "Sorry, I didn't get much sleep last night." I sai aloud before I realized it. I ...

Serena: I grabbed his hand and pulled him toward the car. I knew him. He wasmy brother's best friend afterall. I really liked hanging out with him. It was fun. ...

**I really like the idea! XD I miss you posting though! =*(**

Serena: "I don't think that I have a choice." I smiled up at his wonderful face. I momentarily forgot about the hospital, and everything else around us. I just saw ...

Serena: I looked over at Mike quizzically, but was immediately blocked from his mind. I growled. "Not fair." I complained. My brother looked at me oddly. "What isn't?" I laughed. ...

Serena: I woke up to Brian calling my name. I walked out of my room in shorts and a tank, still tired. I saw Brian standing there in a wet ...

Brian: I complained greatly. I din't want to rest. "I'm fine," I lied. "I don't need rest." She continued smiling at me. "You liar. Yes you do. i'm leaving, so ...

Serena: I looked at him and giggle. it was pretty funny. I was smiling. He made me smile. I felt somewhat better being able to laugh. I was so tired ...

**okay, night. XD**

Brian: I smiled. I took her hand and rubbed my fngers over it. I kissed it gently, softly. she was just so alluring. "Do you want to...go out with me?" ...

**Lol. Then get that character in there! He could be a friend of her brother, or something. I want to get back to he story. Lol. =p**

Brian: I could feel myself liking her. I had no idea why, but I knew I did. "That was before a vampire saved me." I teased lightly, smiling. I was ...